Prologue
What is love? In my
world, it all started at birth. The earth was taken from the state with
luxurious flashing screens in every household and schools for learning,
welcoming to every age, to a place where everything was corrupt to bring us to
where we are today. The ones I dwell with are manipulators of all that is just.
Our world is grey, but this is not how it always was; it was once in beautiful
color, but now, we live in broken cities of broken worlds.
When I was born, the first thing I saw when I
opened my eyes was a man, he was strong, tall, lean, and brave with
shoulder-length dark grey hair flapping in the breeze onto his olive skin; he
was my father. He looked ragged. He had brown streaks across his face, and his
hair had grown unruly as he had waited for me to emerge.
The first sound I
heard as a minute-old infant was my mother’s scream behind us; my father
winced, but he kept running. They had let him go free into the dirt stained
world away from the cottage my parents had intended for me to call home.
I was supposed to be
their beautiful baby girl, born into a carefree world. Nine months before that
they had been living in a perfect little house with a white fence and a golden
retriever named Earth in a city not far from where I had been born. But when
news spread of what the world had become, they had put giant walls around their
city, and all the pregnant women were forced to move to camps. My parents had
wanted to care for me, but they had no choice, except to give me up.
At dark fall, my father slowed at our city’s giant magnificent mahogany doors, and the doors
opened for him, well aware of what they were letting in. Inside the gates, it
was a brand new world, an almost medieval world, the people, they were selling
their goods on the sides of the street, smiling, carefree. The path we walked
was separated from the dirt that everything else resided on; it was a carved
gravel path; it was in preparation for them to come, my father had known. The
buildings beside us were magnificently made as our ancestors had left them.
When my father walked in, every one of the
street people turned, and they rang the streets with applause. He lifted me up
for all to see before laying me on the gravel and turning back to the door. The
men controlling the doors smiled with tears in their eyes. The doors remained
open.
My father hadn’t even
walked to the heart of the opening to the world of misery, before I heard those
loud bangs, unforgettable, even as a babe. I could swear that my father was
smiling when the crimson bolts spread out of him. He fell to the ground, his
eyes staring blankly into the light blue sky.
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ReplyDeleteI wonder how often this happens to writers...this not caring about their characters? I think this is a crucial element in helping you want to continue to hang out with them. Otherwise, you get bored and for sure the reader will be bored. besides, don't we read in order to meet in interesting characters.
It's really, really that you've fallen in love with your characters. How did that happen?
In one of my crime novels (A Simple Act of Love) one of my characters is a serial killer. I can't fall in love with him but I'm really curious as to what makes him want to kill innocent young girls. I'm doing a lot of research on the psychopathic personality.
Your prologue is very intriguing. I love the POV from a child being born. Really neat.